2nd Draft Critique Short Story Editors

Dayna Bennett

Dayna Bennett is a writer, editor, and educator whose articles have been featured in local press and the online journal, Sweatpants and Coffee. She serves on the board as National Secretary for the Women’s National Book Association, and previously served on the advisory board for Central Coast Writers Conference, where she taught workshops for beginning writers on finding your voice and persevering on the creative path. Dayna also works as a freelance editor and with Writers Digest’s Second Draft.  As an educator, Dayna spends her days guiding local teens on the path towards college and has been a mentor working with Chumash Youth since 2004. When she’s not writing or editing, she’s passionately advocating for the Monarch Butterfly. 

As an editor, Dayna has helped writers of all backgrounds polish their prose and develop their stories for publication. As a writing coach, Dayna works with writers on developing and implementing their knowledge of the craft as well as encouraging them to persist.  Writers at any stage of development in any genre are welcome to work with Dayna. 

Mort Castle

Mort Castle is a horror author and a writing teacher who has published over 500 short stories. Twice a winner of the Black Quill award, seven times a Bram Stoker Award nominee, Castle edited On Writing Horror, the primary reference work for dark fiction authors. Mort specialized in horror, dark fantasy, literary, historical, how-to, Pop Fiction, comics/graphic novel. 

Jess Dallow

She has a BFA in Writing for Film and Television from the University of the Arts and worked in entertainment for eight years before returning to her home state of NY where she worked at a literary agency for two years before joining Brower Literary & Management. Jess specialized in YA, adult. contemporary, thriller, romance, crime, & women's fiction.

Margaret Danko

Originally from the heart of the south, Margaret Danko received her BA from Oberlin College before pursuing an MFA from Temple University. While there, she climbed the ranks to become an editor of TINGE Magazine, publishing fiction, essays, and poetry. She has worked as a freelance editor and media consultant. A lover of the dark, the quirky, and the fantastical, Margaret has a keen eye for projects that take unexpected turns or are told from unusual perspectives. Margaret specializes in literary fiction with teeth, historical fiction with a dash of magical realism, fresh literary and commercial suspense, spooky contemporary and fantasy YA, narratives with a deep sense of place and history, quirky and heartwarming family stories, and rom-coms full of charm and whimsy. She is also interested in nonfiction in the areas of humor, lifestyle, popular science, health/wellness, true crime, and current affairs.  

Jessica Evans

Jessica Evans is a novelist and expert developmental editor with over ten years of professional experience in storytelling and book editing, specializing in witch lit, dark academia, contemporary fantasy, and fiction. She is also interested in Speculative, YA, memoir, poetry, short story. She holds an MFA in Fiction from Spalding University. Her work weaves themes of rituals, family dynamics, and cultural diversity, making her a three-time Pushcart nominee. Represented by Amy Collins of Talcott Notch Literary Services, Jessica's global perspective—shaped by international travels and multilingual fluency—infuses her narratives with depth and authenticity. Passionate about community service, Jessica is dedicated to the Veteran's Writing Project, where she volunteers to use her editorial expertise to empower military-connected writers. She is a member of the Editorial Freelancers Association and the Women's Fiction Writing Association. Check out her newsletter, learn more about her, or connect on social media. 

Megan Flahive 

When Megan was a kid she refused to take naps, so her preschool teachers taught her to read instead. A lifelong learner, her favorite stories transport her to another place where there are no bounds to the imagination. She has a deep, enduring love for travel, other cultures, fairy tales, and food. She loves to partner with authors for developmental edits and help propel their work forward through characterization, worldbuilding, plot, pacing, and more. Megan is most interested in MG and YA Fantasy, Sci-Fi, and Historical Fiction. She is also proficient in proofreading and copy editing, focusing more closely on details like grammar, word choice, and punctuation, to make sure the piece is clean and polished. She can’t wait to collaborate with you and polish your gem! 

Terri Valentine

The writing career of romance novelist Terri Valentine is truly a Cinderella story. An avid reader all of her life, she began writing her first historical romance in the summer of 1985 on an old Smith-Corona manual typewriter. Of course it had several keys that stuck, and invariably every time she made even minor changes the entire manuscript had to be completely retyped. In spite of such adversities, she believed in herself and finished that first valiant effort, and then went on to revise her manuscript several times before satisfied.